Tuesday, March 18, 2008

concept: France(bottom) India(top)


8 comments:

esh said...

maybe it needs a tighter cropping? I think the mood comes from the colors and the darkness, but you may not need all that space.
That the two police (police, right?) are outlined clashes with the main character, I think. I like the way the police look, but then you see her and they seem more like the background.

cake-o said...

you mean tighter cropping of shapes along the lines? i was trying to do, ahm...drawing lines outside of shape kinda style. but i know, i'm not quite there to convince audience with that.
the reason why 2 popo are just lines is caz Ninja girl and the guy on the corner are the main characters and i wanto indicate that by only painting them.
what do you mean the darkness?? i'm rick james, biatch. but seriously, what should i do with it?

-Keika- said...

I agree with what esh said.
I would crop the composition so you have the 2 police man and the ninja girl. The ninja girl, yesh she should be in outline or else it wouldn't look consistant. You need consistancy to hold the entire peice together. I think by just having her in saturated color would already help her stand out. You even have the ray of light to help direct our eyes. Have you tried coloring the 2 policemen? I noticed that you colored the posters and the tiles...and I feel that those pop out more than the 2 men. I would either take out all the extra colors or color by distinguishing the hierachy of what you want people to see after the girl( first read second, third...etc).

cake-o said...

so, i changed the image. i put colors on two popos and shadow on the dude on corner. i think it looks mucho better??
but, i still have problem with the main character. she is not there, you know. i have same problem with the Sinco de Mayo image. the huge skelton thingy on the back is standing out more and only that thing is in diffrent...style, i guess. i don't know how the hell that happened. i feel like i spend so much detail to those two (the girl in French and the skelton in Mexico), and those two are the two which is not working!!! i should follow my instant instistant instinct. i was tryin fixing them, but more i spend time, more not working..grrrrrr....

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